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Finding peace from the horizon afar
The last light of the Sun
Far across the silhouette of dark leafless trees -
The pure form of soul.
Its identity no longer its fruits or green leaves
Echoed me of purity, originality, and letting go
When the sun was high in the sky above
I lift my face and squint my eyes
Neither the sun nor I can see each other well
To show my calm face with no visible marks,
Whether created or natural, which I used to have
When the day was brighter only to face the Sun.
Now when my room is dark and outside dusk
I can rest a while on my patio swing
And enjoy the shades of the Sunset sky with dark trees in pale light
Since ages, the sunset has moved and inspired humanity
With a promising note of acceptability – Everything that starts ends;
Everything that ends starts again
With every possible imagination – the human mind can imagine
And with a lesson definite – of letting go
Letting go of ego and the sense of belongingness.      
                                                                                              By Bharati Singha
                                                                                         

  

  


25 comments:

  1. Sunsets are so inspiring!
    Very beautifully written Bharati!

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  2. Beautiful photo and wonderful poetry

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  3. Really beautiful lines, Bharati!
    You have expressed the true situation & emotions- I could actually imagine myself squinting to look at the Sun & then enjoy the sight towards evening when it's pleasant!
    I love the lesson at the end! :)

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  4. Lovely poem! Indeed deep emotions...

    Regards,
    Sindhu
    Tantu
    The Arts & Me

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  5. Everything that starts ends;
    Everything that ends starts again
    Beautiful lines Bharati--in fact the whole poem is beautiful.

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    1. Thank You, Indu ji. It's a great honor for me, you find my poem beautiful.

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  6. Sunset and letting go, both are related in a beautiful way in your poem Bharati! Nice :)

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    1. Being a sunset watcher, I love all those things that sunset sky offers. Yes, I tried my best to relate those two things. Thanks for the lovely words :)

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  7. sunset is nicely expressed in your poem. nice :)

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  8. Deep and lovely lines Ma'm. The comparison of Letting go and sunset- Superb!

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  10. Nice Poem :)
    I nominate you for The Liebster Award. Check the post---->
    http://mybloglifeshighway.blogspot.in/2013/12/my-first-award.html

    Congratulations :)

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    1. Thanks, Garima. Glad you nominated me for the Liebster award. This is my second Liebster award :)

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  11. Beautiful! There is nothing like the sunset sky :)

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    1. yes, there is nothing like the sunset sky :)
      Thanks for stopping by and making such a nice comment.

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  12. Nicely written. trying this skill and become good poem writer :D
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