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(As you are reading it, read it in an
adorable tone)
Amidst the night blooming
fragrant flowers,
With the breeze so swift,
so gentle,And the night so young
Let me stop and ponder for a while
The place is quite familiar and the song too
Oh! Forever, why are you so long?
Do I really exist that long?
Getting tired of the rat
race,
The annoying vexed
venture of impeccabilityWith some overwhelming impossibility.
The exact lines though I remember no longer
The exact feelings although I do preserve for the decades longer
The Residue of a fading memory, I say
The lines read somewhat like -
Twinkling stars among the white clouds in the night sky and,
The poet's loneliness, his remembrance of someone very dear
Such song, such poem
No longer I can hear,
Amidst the hue and cry my dear,
Stories are different
today,
Memories somehow prevailsPlucked rose or an expensive Ferrari
The journey in between is too long,
And full of forgetfulness
Pausing with sharp shocking turns
With a noise within the head
"Love conquers all"- they say.
By Bharati Singha
Nice lyrics. May be you can give the tune too. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat idea indeed. But till now I have not explored that realm. I really appreciate your comment :)
DeleteLyrically lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Deepak.
DeleteNice thought..great lyrical presentation :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Maniparna. I tried to put some rhythms, it seems I have done it successfully.
DeleteThis is Simply Amazing..Each Line has a Melody in it.. :D
ReplyDeleteThanks, Harsha. Glad you find them melodious.
DeleteBharati you are tough to understand.
ReplyDeleteInduji, I agree. :)
Deletevery sweet melody in fact a singer can make it live by putting some tune
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Pradip. I feel so appreciated :)
Deleteforget the ratrace. enjoy the moment. :)
ReplyDeleteExactly, that is what I am going to start now. Thank You my friend for this valuable comment :)
DeleteThis is lovely, Bharati! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sreesha :)
DeleteThank you for your visit to my blog. I hope that you will return often
ReplyDeleteWhen I read your beautiful words here. Sometimes happy, then a bit sad...I remembered the words that my friend, who lives on a little island in Thailand, has been attaching to her emails:
As I let go of the need to arrange my life,
the universe brings abundant good to me.
Thank you so much. I am glad to know that my lines made you remember your friend and her sweet words.
DeleteThanks again for stopping by my blog and making it more valuable.
Lovely lyrics :)
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Oh, really, Deepa..Thank you so much.
DeleteI actually read it in that sing song voice... How wonderfully crafted this piece of poetry was Bharathi :-)
ReplyDeleteRicha
So sweet of you, Richa. Thank you.
DeleteNice poem, Bharati :)
ReplyDeleteMay we all conquer the noise in our head and hear the sweet music of love :)
Amen!! Thanks you, Anita.
DeleteWonderful poem...
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Thank you so much Kiran for the award. Definitely, I will collect my award very soon :)
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